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I can't get her mouth right.
boohoo, helps please.

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:iconfatchaos:
Hmmm, even though I am not an anatomical expert, I would make it slightly wider, to start with, and stretch out the upper lip along. I think.

And I would even go so far to advice to plan very carefully how much "blackness" you use on the open mouth, more than there already is might be too much.

I probably didn't help at all, but I did what I could!!

Ps. This is ought to look great once finished...

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:iconkilky18:
her mouth is quite low, and on that angle it would be 'slightly' higher only just, since its such a close up it just needs subtle changes, try finding a similar angle and reference it, it always helps with me, then you kinda just wing it lol.

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:iconfijeta:
mans tahts be lookins reals goods

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I draws reels gaod:D
:iconvousielle:
Yeah, winging it is my MO.

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:iconvousielle:
Thank you, also I plan to make the entire picture darker, so it wont look so out of place.

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:iconfatchaos:
Ah. Great, a gloomy mood for a zombie picture cannot fail =P

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If the things I imagine would become reality, the world would be a much, much more... intriguing place... For me.
:icontareksalom:
you've got to draw it higher
:iconcomrade-k-rad:
It's a bit low, and narrow. Looks like it could be stretched around to her left a bit more.

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:iconvousielle:
Okay

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